本书由较容易的问题讲起,逐步过渡到较难的问题,*后是习作评改。习作评改部分**针对语言的修改、分析,修改后的文章在论据论证、语句衔接方面并不**,但篇幅所限,就不一一细评。四、六级的作文指令中有的已经给出了英文句子。本书修改了部分作文题目中已给出的固定表达,目的不是教读者不遵守考试规则,而是从纯语言的角度,将*合适的语言表达方式提供给读者。书中前半部分出现过的许多句子和用词的问题的重新出现在习作评改具体的应用环境中。
本书自出版以来受到读者好评及诸多建议,应读者要求,本书在**版基础上进行了改版,增加了近三年四、六级写作范文11篇,老作文20篇,根据学生写作中常用错的表达,增加了第三章的内容,并对原版内容进行了修订。目前市场上四、六级的作文指导书多侧重结构、范文和语法,而侧重于句子和用词方面的书见得不多,关于作文修改的书也很罕见。希望本书能够填补这个空缺,给同学们提供实际的帮助。

**章 段落结构的问题
第二章 句子的问题
滥用从句
不会使用短语
不会使用并列结构
下笔时缺乏考虑
Tt引导的从句达到泛滥的程序
需要使用从句的情况
第三章 在写作中经常用错的表达
平行结构
one 和ones被滥用
意义过于模糊的几个词
写作时应该尽量避免使用的词
第四章 急需掌握的表达
第五章 习作评改
四级作文
Passages1 Welcome to Our Club
Passages2 On the Spring Festival Gala
Passages3 Students Selecting Their Lecturers
Passages4 Volunteer Reruitment
Passages5 Should the University Campus be Open to Tourists?
Passages6 Happy Teacher's Day
Passages7 My Most Is Getting Smaller
Passages8 The World Is Getting Smaller
Passages9 Reading Selectively or Extensively
Passages10 How to Succeed in a Job Interview
Passages11 What Would Happen If There Were No Power?
Passages12 Traeling
Passages13 Books
Passages14 Bicycle in China
Passages15 Cooking
Passages16 Television
Passages17 Can Money Buy Happiness?
Passages18 Advantage of a Job Interview
Passages19 The Two-day Weekend
Passages20 Global Shortage of Fresh Water
Passages21 Practice Makes Perfect
Passages22 Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus
Passages23 Harmfulness of Fake Commodities
Passages24 Do“Lucky Numbers”Rdally Bring Good Luck?
Passages25 Don't Hesitate to Say“No”
Passages26 How I Finance My College Education
Passages27 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
Passages28 Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport
Passages29 The Students of China
Passages30 Love
Passages31 The Ever Growing World Population
Passages32 Underground Cites:Are They Possibe?
Passages 33 Living in the City or in the Country
Passages 34 Smoking and Health
Passages 35 Computers
Passages 36 Education
六级作文
Passagess 1 The Celebration of Western Festivals
Passagess 2 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?
Passagess 3 Traveling Abroad
Passagess 4 A Letter Declining A Job Offer
Passagess 5 Say No to Pirated Products
Passagess 6 Health Gains in Developing Countries
Passagess 7 Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports
Passagess 8 Are Pets Good for Mankind?
Passagess 9 Teenage Smoking
Passagess 10 Buses vs. Private Cars
Passagess 11 Should Parents Buy Computers for Their Kids
Passagess 12 Advertisements
Passagess 13 Family Planning
Passages 14 City Life Vs. Country Life
Passages 15 Failure
Passages 16 A Letter Welcoming Your Schoolmate
Passages 17 How Do I Finance My College Education
Passages18 Reading Selectively or Extensively
Passages 19 Don't Hesitate to Say“No”
Passages 20 Do “Lucky Numbers”Really Bring Good Luck?
Passages 21 My View on Fake Commodities
Passages 22 My View on Job-Hopping
Passages 23 Haste Makes Waste
Passages 24 Why Do I Take the College English Test Band 6?
Passages 25 Should Firecrackers Be Banned?
Passages 26 Wealth and Happiness
Passages 27 Fighting Against Crimes
Passages 28 Economic Development and Pollution
Passages 29 Fast Food
Passages 30 Travelling
Passages 31 Fighting Against Corruption
Passages 32 China's Entry into the WTO
Passages 33 Success in the Bid for Olympic Games
Passages 34 Job Interviews
Passages 35Traffic Jam

本书优势及卖点:

目前时常上的四、六级作文指导书主要讲的是谋篇布局和段落结构;但针对语言表达方面,要么是提供范文,要么仅是讲解语法,涉及句子结构和遣词造句的内容却少之又少。而这正是制约学生提高写作水平的瓶颈。鉴于此,本书有如下四大创新:
※ 创新1 按照循序渐进的科学学习方法,直击四、六级作文核心难点——遣词、造句。
※ 创新2 结合实例,指出句式呆板、语言罗嗦的根源,使语言更为简洁,表达更为流畅。
※ 创新3 精选大量“急需掌握的表达”和“写作中用错的表达”,使语言更为地道,表达更流畅。
※ 创新4 新东方权威写作专家包凡一老师逐字逐句修改学生写作原文71篇,并加以精辟点评。在真实、具体的应用环境中再现“句子结构+遣词造句”的魅力,凸显本书实战性!

读者定位:所有相参加四六级考试的考生,及对英语学习与写作感兴趣的读者。

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